Comments on: Bloomwood 1: Fresh Beginnings http://www.ovxii.com/general/bloomwood-1-fresh-beginnings Just another WordPress site Tue, 31 Aug 2010 19:24:32 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: Chynna http://www.ovxii.com/general/bloomwood-1-fresh-beginnings#comment-37 Chynna Tue, 04 Aug 2009 17:35:27 +0000 http://blog.paperskies.net/?p=118#comment-37 I'd never even header of a legacy story before now. I think I'll have to research more into them ^^ I really enjoyed your though, can't wait for part 2 :D x I’d never even header of a legacy story before now.
I think I’ll have to research more into them ^^
I really enjoyed your though, can’t wait for part 2 :D

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]]> By: Averie http://www.ovxii.com/general/bloomwood-1-fresh-beginnings#comment-36 Averie Sat, 18 Jul 2009 13:42:50 +0000 http://blog.paperskies.net/?p=118#comment-36 Thanks for the read! And great suggestion, I'll definitely try to do better next time. :) Thanks for the read! And great suggestion, I’ll definitely try to do better next time. :)

]]> By: Andrea http://www.ovxii.com/general/bloomwood-1-fresh-beginnings#comment-35 Andrea Wed, 15 Jul 2009 13:25:16 +0000 http://blog.paperskies.net/?p=118#comment-35 It was really interesting to read. XD I myself don't play Sims, though I do enjoy looking at the blogs of other people who do. My only suggestion is to keep your tenses consistent. At times you kept switching from present to past. Even though it didn't really muddle the context, it was at times a bit confusing. It was really interesting to read. XD I myself don’t play Sims, though I do enjoy looking at the blogs of other people who do.

My only suggestion is to keep your tenses consistent. At times you kept switching from present to past. Even though it didn’t really muddle the context, it was at times a bit confusing.

]]> By: Averie http://www.ovxii.com/general/bloomwood-1-fresh-beginnings#comment-34 Averie Fri, 03 Jul 2009 02:36:06 +0000 http://blog.paperskies.net/?p=118#comment-34 Leighton > all! Glad you like it ^^. I am working on chapter 2 now. Leighton > all!

Glad you like it ^^. I am working on chapter 2 now.

]]> By: Averie http://www.ovxii.com/general/bloomwood-1-fresh-beginnings#comment-33 Averie Fri, 03 Jul 2009 02:34:25 +0000 http://blog.paperskies.net/?p=118#comment-33 Orange hair! Wow that's pretty cool. I am playing around with my Sims' hair now too just to see what the kids will end up with. I love Sims with unique features. Orange hair! Wow that’s pretty cool. I am playing around with my Sims’ hair now too just to see what the kids will end up with. I love Sims with unique features.

]]> By: Kalina http://www.ovxii.com/general/bloomwood-1-fresh-beginnings#comment-32 Kalina Thu, 02 Jul 2009 20:13:04 +0000 http://blog.paperskies.net/?p=118#comment-32 Yup, I first started my family with a black woman and a red head man. The kids had dark skin and bright orange hair DD: I fixed that pretty quick, but it's still fun to see what happens. Hmm, I've never made any sims with skin colors that were out of the ordinary. Gotta try that some time! Yup, I first started my family with a black woman and a red head man. The kids had dark skin and bright orange hair DD: I fixed that pretty quick, but it’s still fun to see what happens.

Hmm, I’ve never made any sims with skin colors that were out of the ordinary. Gotta try that some time!

]]> By: Allison http://www.ovxii.com/general/bloomwood-1-fresh-beginnings#comment-31 Allison Thu, 02 Jul 2009 16:44:59 +0000 http://blog.paperskies.net/?p=118#comment-31 Yay, Leighton! I love where this legacy is going. :grin: Very interesting so far. Yay, Leighton!
I love where this legacy is going. :grin: Very interesting so far.

]]> By: Averie http://www.ovxii.com/general/bloomwood-1-fresh-beginnings#comment-30 Averie Thu, 02 Jul 2009 14:38:32 +0000 http://blog.paperskies.net/?p=118#comment-30 Yay thank you for the compliments! Who doesn't love mixed babies? Haha that background story took me awhile to come up with, at first I was just gonna make Val an alien instead but decided not to. ;-) I am so happy that you like it! Yay thank you for the compliments! Who doesn’t love mixed babies? Haha that background story took me awhile to come up with, at first I was just gonna make Val an alien instead but decided not to. ;-)

I am so happy that you like it!

]]> By: Averie http://www.ovxii.com/general/bloomwood-1-fresh-beginnings#comment-29 Averie Thu, 02 Jul 2009 14:33:30 +0000 http://blog.paperskies.net/?p=118#comment-29 Thank you! I try my best. ^^ Thank you! I try my best. ^^

]]> By: Kalina http://www.ovxii.com/general/bloomwood-1-fresh-beginnings#comment-28 Kalina Thu, 02 Jul 2009 14:20:34 +0000 http://blog.paperskies.net/?p=118#comment-28 This is adorable! I love you writing style, and your little background "story". Definitely a great start - and with a Japanese guy! Whoo, gotta love asians :DD Keep up the good work, can't wait to read more! Btw, love the blog layout. I assume you made it yourself? You're very talented ;) This is adorable! I love you writing style, and your little background “story”. Definitely a great start – and with a Japanese guy! Whoo, gotta love asians :D D Keep up the good work, can’t wait to read more!

Btw, love the blog layout. I assume you made it yourself? You’re very talented ;)

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